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Comments for 'The Furious Hatred: Through the Eyes of an Elite'

2:51 pm | June 11, 2004
your stories were recomended to me, so i started where you did, with: 'The Furious Hatred: Through the Eyes of an Elite'. Not bad. I enjoyed the decriptivness of your writing, it allowed me to believe that it was really happening. The chosen point of view is truly a unique one; adds a twist to the sotry of HALO!, i will have to read some of your other stories now.
3:56 am | May 10, 2004
Look at me I'm back in time

P.S. el fudge... ok I've run out of puns... oh well no one looks back here any way.
11:53 am | March 10, 2004
Great fanfic, you write in an awesome way!
1:39 am | March 10, 2004
MAybe you should include sentinles and 343 guilty sparks battleing the flood. It is their job you know. Nice story.
12:13 pm | February 26, 2004
Carrier forms also come from combat forms too damaged to be effective in combat anymore.
8:37 pm | February 21, 2004
Perhaps the carrier forms are not just simply mutated grunts/jackals, but are more of an incubator. If you think about it, the spores get into the host, multiply through asexual reproduction/budding, and then eat the carrier from the inside, with the exception of the brain, essential mussels, and nervous system. These spores then go into a metamorphosis state, and transform in the infectious forms we've grown to ignore. This would explain why the carriers POP when we shoot them, there is warm air copressed by the pressence of the infectious forms, who leave little room for anything else.
10:39 pm | January 29, 2004
God, I loved this one two, but then again I like anything with elites in it, and you write amazingly anyways. Great Stuff. :D
10:24 pm | October 8, 2003
Yeah, I have a really good story idea that I am just dying to write. It's going to be a series. I just have to find the time to write it. Sorry its been so long guys, school is really eating up all of my time and draining me of all of my energy...
10:12 pm | September 27, 2003
so.....have u found an idea for a new story, yet?
10:12 pm | September 27, 2003
so.....have u found an idea for a new story, yet?
4:12 am | September 6, 2003
hehe, that's funny. No, really, I find that quite amusing.
Bob Dole (the pimp)
3:41 am | September 6, 2003
Bob Dole says: Explosively entertaining!
11:13 am | August 21, 2003
Believe me, I will. Writing FanFics is fun anyways. Now, if I could only get off my lazy arse and write some...
Warrior Elite
3:12 am | August 17, 2003
be sure and write more!
Warrior Elite
3:12 am | August 17, 2003
be sure and write more!
12:18 am | August 17, 2003
Thanks, guys
Warrior Elite
4:57 pm | August 16, 2003
Holy Crap! That was fricken awsome! That had to be the best fan fiction i've ever read!
10:05 pm | July 23, 2003
I had a nice reading, it was really nice. It was explaned and described so well, that i could draw in my mind, what is happening.
I'll wait for the next series, if there is a series to come.
3:21 am | July 23, 2003
A little technical error on my part: In my story, I mentioned the Seed Pods. They are not officially called Seed Pods; they are called Carrier forms. I'll correct that in any future stories. Seed Pods just came from what me and my friends first called them.
6:25 am | July 22, 2003
everyone: umm please dont read my stories by the way. they suck ass. or if u do, dont comment lol
6:23 am | July 22, 2003
This is a great story! maybe we should make a series? perhapz not, but still... this was great. Alot better than mine lol 10/10 keep it up!
9:12 pm | July 21, 2003
It was cool, good descriptions! It was juicy. I thought it was neat seeing it from the enemy's point of view instead of the hero's POV all the time. I never really thought about what the Covies had to go through, seein' their friends die and all.
2:54 pm | July 19, 2003
I don't think I can make a sequel. I posted this as a single story. If I post another Furious Hatred, they might get mad at me. Sorry.
MadJackal (The Author)
12:54 am | July 19, 2003
I'm not sure that I will do a sequel. There's not much else in Katr's furture other than to be killed in Halo's end less than 24 hours from the end of the story. But I could make another Furious Hatred from the perspective of another Elite...or maybe there is something Katr' could do (I just had a wierd idea)... Thanks Elfster! I'll see what I can do.
12:50 am | July 19, 2003
are there going to be any more chapters or is it a single story?
The Author
8:33 pm | July 18, 2003
I'm glad most of you all liked my first posted fan fiction! Sorry about not indenting. I kind of screwed up when I was posting this one. To answer "???????"'s question, I made up this event. I thought it would be pretty cool to have a massive Flood assault on the Covenant defending the control center. It kind of gave the Covenant a reason to be brutal and merciless, as if they needed a reason. Such a battle might have happened. The Flood could have been attracted by the large amount of Covenant defending it (a.k.a. Food for Flood).
Thanks guys
5:11 pm | July 18, 2003
Nice story. Elites are cooler than all the rest of the game put together. one thing though: When is this taking place, or is it a modification of the story?
2:42 pm | July 18, 2003
Great job!! This is one of the best Halo fanfictions I've ever read. The Elites are my favourite characters in the game, too. It was very well written. Keep up the good work.
Diamond Dog
6:16 pm | July 17, 2003
Incredible. That ranks among my favorite three, I think. Sweet writing, and Zatr' is a badass. I like the way its from the Covie viewpoint too.
1:48 pm | July 17, 2003
Very good plot, just one comment. Make sure you break up your story a little bit. You know, more than one paragraph? It gets a little hard to read the further you get into it. Indenting helps too. But other than technical stuff, this was a good read.