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Comments for 'A Marine Named Peters: Abandon Hope All Ye Who Enter Here'

12:00 am | November 30, -0001
I was wondering when you would be back...
good story by the way...
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
the Flood huh? the next few chapters are gonna be interesting, but try to make it a whole different idea from "Battle for the Norah" I'm not saying you are but yeah, but good story and I'm sure the next one will be even better.Later
Captain Yossarian
12:00 am | November 30, -0001
Looks good....left me in the fog on a few details though...maybe if you went into some more detail on the power failure and sensor readings and the extended clip? otherwise, sweet.