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Comments for 'A story of betrayal, Part 2: The onslaught begins'

Riley 217
7:26 pm | May 4, 2004
This story was alright. I would have to say also it was a little confusing. I would like to see where this goes.
1:33 am | May 1, 2004
Not bad, not bad at all...A little confusing, but still good. Out of curiousity, who is the guy who named the SPARTANs in the first place. You think he could've been a little more creative. Fred and John? Hmmm...