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Comments for 'Attack on ERISTOCK Part 13: Perimeter Defenders'

10:03 pm | October 31, 2003
Don't talk to me, talk to the name thief.
9:31 pm | October 31, 2003
Yes, I have arrived. Good story, I see you used the idea I gave you for Marks AI. The only thing I can complain abotu was that there was no part about the resistance Flood in this one, I like them.
Keep it up, 9/10.
4:07 pm | October 31, 2003
Anonymous, of course i read the comments about my last part. i take any advice people have to heart and change my story. so all the parts hereafter will be about as long as this part. but what do you mean by it being a long awaited fanfiction? do you mean you've been waiting for something like this? well, thanks for reading.

Baronnetje, thanks you for the praise and reading my story. i try to make it interesting and progessing with the characters in different areas.

Mainevent, i don't know what your problem is. but please don't do it again.
1:07 pm | October 31, 2003
I like your way of writing a lot, Telling the complete story on different locations really works good for a story, yours is original and fun to read, can't wait for the next chapter.
5:15 am | October 31, 2003
Yes, I have shown up.

I see you have read the comments in your last story and have taken the advice, and made your story longer. This was a long awaited fanfiction for me, as your story telling skills are excellent. Good Job and keep writing.
4:18 am | October 31, 2003
I'm a total idiot please kill me i admit im a teenager who insults people for fun hehe!!!
1:48 am | October 31, 2003
the simple answer to where is everyone, is that the latest batch of fanfiction has only been put up by Wu recently. you saw my story before i did. i suppose sooner or later FOrunnER and that Anonymous guy will show up. maybe not. i hope so.

thanks you for the generous comments. even i didn't think it was that good. but, man, published? that is some high praise (that i don't think i'm worthy of). but even if it was published, it wouldn't be very big. but it's growing.

thanks for reading
Sergeant B
9:18 pm | October 30, 2003
Where is everyone?

This is SO good xitWOUND117!! I love it! Awesome man. This should be published. Very good detail and good storytelling dude. No problems but comments (good ones).