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Comments for 'Visions of Purity Part 1: The Spartan'

3:47 am | March 3, 2004
oops sorry wrong story.
3:45 am | March 3, 2004
Excellent. I completely disagree with MC's cousin, After what happened In FS, he would. I can't wait for the third one.
4:09 pm | February 24, 2004
Liked it. I enjoy trying to confuse people, but suceeding is the problem. Still have work to do on my own...

7:03 am | February 23, 2004
Yea this one was good
3:20 am | February 23, 2004
Thanks, FOrunnEr. This one should be better than my last series, so I hope more people read it. But I assure you, there will be explanations for everything. In fact, things will get even more confusing in Part 2, but, in time, everything will make sense.
2:12 am | February 23, 2004
Great to have you back. I loved the story, some of it was a little confusing, but Im pretty sure you'll explain whats what in later editions. Good work.
1:59 am | February 23, 2004
Hmm....reading someone else's story and tring to promote yourself at the same time? Ah, I understand. Not many people read my stories either... But anyway, thanks for the feedback, and I don't have time right now, but I promise I read some of your stories and tell you what I think.
CoLd BlooDed
1:38 am | February 23, 2004
I liked it, well described action, good work X, keep it up.

...and if you don't mind, can you read one of my stories? They both haven't gotten many reviews, and I could use some feedback. :D