Comments for 'A Conclusive History of the United Nations Space Command: Chapter Two: The Colonial Period'
10:27 pm | December 14, 2003
Man that was brilliant. Finally someone writes about the history of the UNSC. 10/10
5:01 am | December 14, 2003
No, I don't work for Bungie. I submitted this to HSP, but they couldn't take it. So... yeah. I'm working on Chapter Three, about the SPARTAN program, right now.
Thanks for the support, guys.
1:45 am | December 14, 2003
Yeah, I agree that this belongs on the story page, there should also be a link to it from the fanfiction submission page that says "Read on your history before you deface it" or something of the like.
Great job, I'd like to see how far you can take this. 10/10
1:21 am | December 14, 2003
ya work for bungie or somethin?
or ur a mad man
10:50 pm | December 13, 2003
Yay, Now I have something to use if I'm gonna need backstory.
THanks and good job.
9:47 pm | December 13, 2003
Geez dude, you rock!! Like rock! Savior guy that tells about UNSC's history. It's awesome. Keep it going. I love this. Now I can learn about my grand-grand-grand-grand-grand-grand-grand-grand sons some 160-500 years later! LOL....
7:00 pm | December 13, 2003
I don't read many fan fics, but that was good.
6:02 pm | December 13, 2003
This makes sense. If you wantd too, you could almost make an intro to a fanfic just by using this. Nice!
I agree that this should be put on HSP. Go for it!
5:44 pm | December 13, 2003
Wow, that was incredibly well done, man. Perfect style of writing and organization for what it is. Very informative as well, strictly following the Microsoft timeline but so well done it still makes it as exciting as most fics. This should be added to the story page of this site so that it is not forgotten as time goes on.
Kudos on the job you did, it couldn't have been made better. I didn't even detect a single spelling/punctuatuion error. 10/10