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Comments for 'One Last Bullet'

12:27 am | June 19, 2004
Yes, and glad we can finally agree on something, Blue.
Blue Angel
7:21 am | January 17, 2004
huh forgot you even wrote a poem.
will good job.
hey someone else snapped at you, who'd of thunk it?
tah tah for now.

by the way the Charg of the Light Brigade is a quite intersesting poem, much longer then yours. I mean very frickin long have you ever read the 'whole' thing before? its quite good. seeya.
Thomas Harper
10:23 pm | January 13, 2004
hey man srry that i snaped at u! real srry anywayz i really really really really LIKED ur poem! u have to make another one!

10:23 pm | January 13, 2004
srry again that i snaped at u and o how the hell do u ahev time to write so many damn good storys! like to read ur next one as well.
Inept Zombie
3:53 pm | January 9, 2004
This story was great
the poem better
i hope you continue
to eat your cheddar?

great job d00d.
6:17 pm | January 4, 2004
Hey everbody I'm back, lol. Sorry for not posting for over a month again I've been caught up in the season and all. Well anyways, walker I sure can't say anthing bad about this story.
Another Halo Gamer
7:50 am | January 3, 2004
The poem wasn't long at all. I would have kept reading as long as you kept writing (typing). Good Job, Walker.
6:18 pm | December 22, 2003
Thanks, and I do: "Charge of the Light Brigade" by Lord Alfred Tennyson.

Semper Fi

3:04 am | December 22, 2003
dude im sooryt but this is the best poem i have ever read on here,. if u know a better one i would liek to read it.
10:27 am | December 21, 2003
That was awesome. Just awesome.

3:04 am | December 21, 2003
Nice poem, to tell you the truth I hate poems and hate reading them But if it's a halo poem.....;)
10:57 pm | December 20, 2003
I like that alot u got talent
7:18 pm | December 20, 2003
12:56 pm | December 20, 2003
Wow! that was a cool poem. Its just like a short story in poem form. Man, i could have never thought of that. COOL!
6:02 am | December 20, 2003
Long, but good. I got no clue how you came up with that. Great job, 10/10
3:33 am | December 20, 2003
2:17 am | December 20, 2003
Good job man...FREAKING LONG! but a great poem...just like an old tale lol...keep this up. 9/10.
11:44 pm | December 19, 2003
You should be happy with it. I would be...
10:52 pm | December 19, 2003
Well, first I came up with the title. It sounded cool, so I started to write a short story to it. That was about two weeks ago. seeing as I never finished, I dropped the short and turned it into a poem. I'm happy with the results.

Semper Fi

9:22 pm | December 19, 2003
great poem pimp
imma be gone for a few weeks
so could ya keep a rec of any good stuff posted for me
ill look em up when im back
id be very grateful
peace everyone
and have a very merry christmas
8:21 pm | December 19, 2003
That is a long fucking poem.

I'm serious.

It's more like a story.

It was good though, merry good.
7:50 pm | December 19, 2003
Good job Walker. It's always a pleasure to see a good piece of Halo poetry.
CoLd BlooDed
4:03 pm | December 19, 2003
This is the kind of poem I'm looking up to now, lol. Great job Walker, how did you come up with this? 10/10
Halo's Finest
3:51 pm | December 19, 2003
I loved the poem. It captured the essence of war as well as the cruelty. Keep writing, man.
Thomas Harper
2:30 pm | December 19, 2003
NICE! sad though........... lol i liked it. hope u make another one.
1:30 pm | December 19, 2003
Very good, like telling a story in poem form.
1:30 pm | December 19, 2003
Nice observation...
12:40 pm | December 19, 2003