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Comments for 'Shadows of Archon (part 4) - Mirror Mirror'



Sarge
9:45 pm | August 15, 2002
Um I don't know what to say honestly.
el_halo_diablo
5:17 pm | August 14, 2002
why dont you review other peoples fan-fic's Wado, your really talented, and I could use some encouragement and advice.
el_halo_diablo
5:13 pm | August 14, 2002
I already have enough trouble trying to come up with names of people on my fan fic...AND LOOK WHAT YOU COME UP WITH!!! I have to say Im quite jealous with your naming capabilities Wado my man
Knightmare
5:04 pm | August 14, 2002
Surprisingly that flows of the tongue easilly!
Wado
3:56 pm | August 14, 2002
No Arch, Forgotten Realms is just the title of the next part. I refer to a really forgotten realm. I mean I almost forgot to include it in the story it is such a small reference. For a momemnt your comment threw me off because I do introduce a new character called Catsandravalahundra into the story. Anyway I already submitted part 5 so I won't say much more about it. Take care Arch man.
Arch
12:38 pm | August 14, 2002
the next chapter is called Forgotten Realms? you aren't gonna start including renouned characters like Drizzt Do'Urden to your story to make it more interesting still, are you?
el_halo_diablo
9:27 pm | August 13, 2002
wow this series is weird, but good...but...weird...I cant exactly put my finger on it. anyways your a good writer with a great imagination. Keep it up!
MCs nightmare
4:23 pm | August 13, 2002
man this series is really good i cant stop reading it, but your grammer could be better, but other than that the series is well worth the time spent reading and i cant wait for the next chapter.
Knightmare
11:27 am | August 13, 2002
One thing i did notice tho was that you had a lot of grammar errors...
Knightmare
11:26 am | August 13, 2002
As usual your stories are interesting and have great "motivation value", you just want more!
Wado
3:30 am | August 13, 2002
I have to work better on the grammar. I rewrote a lot of these last two posts and I think I was up too late when I did it and the quality suffered. Good news is that I got to watch Lord of the Rings on DVD again. Enough excuses from me, I've just got to do a better job.


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