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Comments for 'ES05 - Eternal Sunder (part 05): The Eye of Time'



Wado
8:48 am | December 25, 2003
Thanks everyone for the comments. Welcome back Jink and Nike.
The One and Only Jink
2:03 am | December 25, 2003
Wado, another work of art. Too bad for Princess Kira...I was beginning to like her, dammit! Heh, well, anyway, great to see this is coming along fantastically.

I'm sorry it's been a while since I've written, everyone, but I've been stumped on ideas and recently have decided to take a break. I will be continuing with my series of short stories, Final Fate, and will eventually begin a new series. Speaking of series, I need to get back with In Light of Destiny--I intend to finish it but I'm not sure how. Cheers.

Jink ( I'm STILL here, people)
Nike
7:52 pm | December 23, 2003
Werd, everyone. I'm back from the dead, heh.

Wado, as before, your writing is amazing. So full of detail, so filled with dark, gritty atmosphere. I love it. 10/10
Snake Solid 117
7:14 am | December 23, 2003
I remember, I read this, the first one. You gave a beutifuly detailed destription of the ship, The [i]Eternal Sunder[/i]. A living ship with living, reactive armor, etc. I love the way that you gave each character such...identity. I like how you foreshadow, or hint at the past actually, kind of like a journey for John to find out what he truley is, and what he does truley exsit for, and when he is from.

Anywho, Excellent, as always.

And good luck with the comic, if the plan actually takes form. I had some friends who tried to start a comic but, things didn't go so well. On the other hand, a few others did the same, and there comics turned out quite succesful (tech. Jacket, Reama Mythology).

Anyways, keep up the great work.

P.S. At the risk of sounding like a complete a$$, I could help with illistartions. Me, and a couple of close friends are artists, and would be more than happy to help; that is, if you still wnat to do it.

Check: www.protodepot.com
the people can help with how to get started, and are probably better artists than I.

Hmm, maybe I should just e-mail. :\\
Mainevent
9:45 pm | December 21, 2003
Yea, I'm with CoLd BlooDed on this one, I've never seen the other parts to this story.
Wado
6:22 pm | December 21, 2003
Thanks for the comments.

Welcome back Alpha Lance.

And Carnage Seven was a story that was going to be turned into a comic series. Not funny like the others, but dark and bloody. However, zZombie13 got really busy and I don't think it will happen now. I did get some nice drawing from him of the main characters, though. Anyway, that series is on hold right now. Can't say any more about this, mums is the word.
It's been awhile since I....
5:48 pm | December 21, 2003
Hello everyone. It is I, Alpha Lance, I am back. Well Wado, you amaze me with this story, and simple this was just...WOW. Now I can't give you nothing but the highest score on my scale than a perfect 10.

Now as for me, I'm back for now. I'm gonna continue my series...someday. It feels good to be back reading great work of art like this. Well, have a happy Christmas everyone.

-Alpha Lance
FOrunnER
5:10 pm | December 21, 2003
Hey Wado, I havnt read the story but I got a question. You started a series a few months ago called Carnage Seven, what happened to that?
Wiley
5:08 pm | December 21, 2003
Knew john wouldnt die, hes a very hard man to kill.
10/10. brilliant
CoLd BlooDed
5:01 pm | December 21, 2003
I admire your writing skills, Wado. Great story, but this is the first I've read of these series. The atmosphere in this story is all dark and mysterious, I like it, alot. 10/10

P.S Check out my poem "Have Hope" if you want.


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