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Comments for 'Gateway to Damnation: Episode 1'



Vmanjr
6:39 pm | June 29, 2004
Well I didnt expect to get this many bad comments. I think you guys could of said it maybe in a nicer way, but there was no need to say that this was a waste of your time. Maybe you could of said to work a little harder. And to this dispraiser or whatever his name is I have nothing against you, and im sorry if Im a noob to this, but im sure you were one day to, so maybe you could cut me some slack, cause im not looking for some really mean comments but some comments that help me out. This next part my sound a little mean, but next time maybe you could refrain from acting like such a asshole and know-it-all, even if you are.
Matt
6:32 pm | June 29, 2004
wow. that was a waste of my time.
Mainevent
11:31 am | June 29, 2004
The day will come when Dispraiser is happy; the day all the n00bs have died.
FOrunnER
7:33 pm | June 28, 2004
Ahhh, Dispraiser. When I heard 'oldest fanfic vet' I was thinking Wado, but Dispraiser makes much more sense. He's never really been a happy fellow, but a great writer though.

Oh yah, like Main said, good job on the mod.
Mainevent
11:36 am | June 28, 2004
It had an interesting format, I'll give you that. It was hard to read because it wasn't on the visual medium, but not too hard. There was a good amount of RvB-like material there, and you did refrain from too much cussing.

I applaud you.
Mainevent
3:36 am | June 28, 2004
Good work on that MOD too. Looking great. Keep it up. (To Dispraiser)
Wiley
2:45 am | June 28, 2004
No, Dispraiser, we don't need to know who you are.

Good point though. Wish you had named some authours..but hey...
Anonymous
9:48 pm | June 27, 2004
You do not need to know who I am. I just had to finally come out and say it, I could not hold it in anymore. This Fan Fiction has been deteriorating greatly. Ever since I came here at the first Fan Fiction page,(Now 160-something),I didn't know what to expect. Fan Fiction was at it's best a year or two ago, Now, it's all not worth reading anymore. There are a few authors around who are good writers who will remain unnamed. I would know, I am.......I was the oldest Fan Fiction vet on this site. Now, this site has been overrun with newbs and nOObs. Remember romac1991's lesson, how he left with anger towards all Fan Fiction regulars. That is an example of how bad and vulgar this Fan Fiction section has become. Hopefully, when I return to this site, whenever that will be, I hope it will have recovered. You may chose to listen to me or shun me, but I'm not going to be coming to this site for awhile. Farewell.......
FOrunnER
11:35 am | June 27, 2004
A little confusing dude, like Young Gunna said, I can't even decide if I like it or not because its so...confusing.

Im sure this is a RvB spinoff, but try and give a little more backround information to make this clearer.
Vmanjr
3:39 am | June 27, 2004
Im very sorry for the inconvienence everyone. It was my first time, and i thought it would get better comments, but hey, they all help out and I appreciate the posts. Ill be re-doing this and putting out again. Hopefully you guys like the next one, which is this one, done better. I tried to write it diferently, and for that im sorry, but it wont be the same next time.

Sincerely,
Vmanjr
Mastermind TH
2:18 am | June 27, 2004
Due to the rise of quotes, remarks, and conversations about oral sexuality, does anyone see the potential dangers of venereal diseases anymore?
Dave Luck
1:32 am | June 27, 2004
I can't follow this. Is it a script? If it is, the Names should be bolded and written in proper script format.

- Dave.
Young Gunna
7:30 pm | June 26, 2004
I know, I think it's like their in blood gulch and they own the red base and the blue base snuck in through the portals. It will probably go through all the multiplayer levels. I can't decide if I like it or not...
343 Salty Beans
7:21 pm | June 26, 2004
Wierd. I've never seen a fanfic written like this before.

343SB


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