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Comments for 'SPARTAN II: Stranded Chapter I: Crash Landing'



Chainer of Cabal
8:06 pm | March 3, 2004
Vinny you suck! But LostRock, James Kinsella, and 'scope', should go back to kindergarten, after the hell MC has been through and is now got to the Grunt homeworld! If that was me I been cursing too.

Spawn rules!!!
Sorry! Thanks For Comments
3:16 am | May 3, 2003
I usually write fan fics and post them at a place where swearing is common, hehe. I'll cut it out from now on. This is supposed to take place a long time after they leave Halo, so they've been traveling in space for a while, and they kind of stumbled on the Grunt world...I'm having some problems with chapter 2, writer's block, I'll get it done though, and post it soon.
scope
10:39 pm | April 28, 2003
8/10 NO MORE CURSSING!! Chief isnt some kind of gangster in the gettos.
James Kinsella
3:45 pm | April 27, 2003
Interesting, most people have John find his way back to Earth pretty quickly. I found it interesting that Halo was so closed to the Grunt homeworld. If it was that close shouldn't they have found it a long time ago? Just a thought. LostRock is right, cut the swearing, the MC seems to have pretty good control over his tongue in the books, but you kinda threw that out the window.
7/10
LostRock
3:23 pm | April 27, 2003
Not a bad story, but whoa, cut down on the swearing. The Chief's a soldier, not one of the Sopranos.


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