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Comments for 'Hermes Trismegistus, Chapter 14'



vector40
5:20 pm | October 24, 2001
Good flow, good wording, interesting premise.::thumbs up::
animist
4:12 pm | October 24, 2001
5/5! thought the background added was good. liked the fact your ominous faith could of been adapted from any religion.
crystyPyro
5:45 am | October 24, 2001
i new it coop with the elite... well this story was good but it was really short like.anyway was good reading.


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