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Comments for 'Black Ops: Theta Omicron part 2' |
russ687
4:37 pm | June 23, 2004
Ok, one big thing I caught is you started at lot of sentces with their name over and over again. For example:
Bob was tired from as hard days work. Bob was walking home when he saw some firends. Bob waved to them and they waved back. Bob wished he could have an ice cream cone. Bob hared his name...
Don't do that, it makes you sound reduntant. Also, if you do NOT know the code, put space between your paragraphs. For example:
NOT like this:
The cold windy night shook Bob as he trried to make it home for dinner. Along the way he noticed that the once open 7-Eleven was now closed.
"This must be a bad storm," he said to himself.
But LIKE this:
The cold windy night shook Bob as he trried to make it home for dinner. Along the way he noticed that the once open 7-Eleven was now closed.
"This must be a bad storm," he said to himself.
Notice the space ^^ in between the paragrpah and the quotation. Do this between paragraphs too.
Ahhh, as for storyline, try and keep it real and reasonable. It wasn't bad, just not that great.
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343 Salty Beans
6:07 pm | June 22, 2004
Refer to romac1991's comment. Find the code in the FF guidelines, or use this:
When you indent, italicize, and bolden your text in your word-editing program, it doesn't carry over to your FF/ That's why you proofread and check for mistakes. Instead, do this:
to italicize a block of text, put [i] before the block, and [/i] to end it. To bolden, do [b], [/b], and underlining is [u], [/u].
Indenting helps seperate paragraphs. To put an indent, put a [indent] where you want it to show up.
Finally, for a horizontal rule, put [hr] between two paragraphs. A horizontal rule usually shows a change in time, place, or other major switch in the story.
Yeah, there's the code. Use it, or the regulars go nuts on you.
343S
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romac1991
12:27 pm | June 21, 2004
CODE PLEASE
romac1991
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