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Comments for 'A Second Last Chance: Book 1, Chapter 5 - Unlikely Alliance'



saturn
6:14 pm | July 11, 2002
I like how the covenant dude talks like yoda. that's unique.
killa_snypa7
2:47 am | July 9, 2002
In a word, Wow! nice deteal, few errors, and overuse of Shit...really, good.../this is turning out to be very odd...cant wait to see what happens..
Knightmare Wolf
12:05 am | July 9, 2002
maybe a few small errors, a lot of use of the word "Shit", use DIVERSE swear words and not just one for 90 percend of the time, lol nice work!


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