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Comments for 'Halo: A Comedy 2'

12:39 am | April 25, 2004
Pointless but good. I mean, we can't have too many 'I'm a serious Marine going out to die for my country, no, wait, WORLD' kind of stuff. V good again.
Nick Kang
10:06 am | April 22, 2004
Oh man...that was really really really pointless(as said before), but pretty funny.

"Can I have a bagel, I'm kinda Hungry."

7:19 pm | April 21, 2004
heh heh heh put a few twists in it like make the shades invisible and MC is like AH WHERE IS IT! *trips over it*
MC's Cousin
3:36 pm | April 21, 2004
Yum...another comedy (but without me, it's ok, don't worry-JK). I can see I will be doing the "comedy scene" for a day. Good times, good times.

As for the story: yup, pointless. Pretty dang funny, but pointless. I can honestly say I can't wait until you show Jonny how to run into the center of the grav lift whilst you blast the area around him with your shade (er...maybe I do that).

Signing Off

1:06 pm | April 21, 2004
haha, Well if it makes ya feel any better something about it bothers me too. It's not... smart enough. Oh well, at least the intorduction was nice and satirical.
Snake Solid 117
12:47 pm | April 21, 2004
Pointless. Funny, but completely and utterly pointless. I rather liked it, but there was just something about it that bugged me. I'll get back to you on that. Anyways, good job.
10:39 am | April 21, 2004
Why is 'Horror' giggling? I've read crappy comedies before, but we now have a new champion! Here's your trophy!

(A really bad comment)
P.S. Sorry about the criticism
12:48 am | April 21, 2004
you can't see it but im practically giggling *and i'm a guy,
12:45 am | April 21, 2004
Oh yeah. I remember the original.