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Comments for 'Under the sergeant's cap (chapter 3)' |
Monitor101
4:18 am | March 2, 2003
Awasome lets kill those fuckers (in the back ground a click sounds signifying that the mon has just taken the safety off an assault rifle
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Alex Ross
9:20 pm | January 21, 2003
=) Sweet, let's go. (A Remington is loaded and cocked a second later)
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moniter101
1:03 am | January 21, 2003
hell alex ross ill help u hunt anonymous and bill down.
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NobleWard
6:00 pm | January 20, 2003
Good story so far. Intense fighting and creative strategies (I never the sarge fly into three grunts in the game, is there some code I got type in to get that? lol.) Really good so far. Keep it up.
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Traumatised Marine
8:42 am | January 20, 2003
I'm not sure what spelling mistakes I'm making unless you're talking about the english spellings of certain words and not american, maybe, but maybe not.
NO RACIAL ABUSE PLEASE!!
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el_halo_diablo
4:54 am | January 20, 2003
Ok, picture yourself in detention for 8 hours, except, all your friends are actually your parents and your sister, now imagine that the classroom is actually a Subaru. That was my whole "exciting" weekend(damn my sister and wanting to visit Humbolt University), so expect even MORE delays on the last part of Wings of Death. And back to the real point, keep it up TM it sounds like you have a good story. :D
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Hikaru-119
11:21 pm | January 19, 2003
I thought it was pretty good. A few errors in spelling, but pretty good. I am also glad to see somebody decided to have us see the war through the eyes of the marines. Instead of concentrating on main characters like MC. I'll look forward to the next one.
Oh yeah what difficulty are you basing this on? If I am correct, as I probably am, the war was most accurate to Legendary.
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Alex Ross
11:19 pm | January 19, 2003
I do indeed enjoy this series. Keep em comin yo. Oh, Bill and Anonymous...the afterlife needs a couple more souls. If you ever say anything else, AND I ACTUALLY FIND YOU BY SOME STROKE OF LUCK, I will rip out your hearts through your feet! IS THIS TOO MANY WORLDS? "THERE ONCE WERE TWO PEEPS NOBODY LIKED, SO THEY WERE DISMEMBERED LIMB FOR LIMB, AND A HOLIDAY WAS CREATED TO HONOR THIS DAY. THE END!" Anyway good so far man. Don't stop now!
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Anonymous
10:18 pm | January 19, 2003
I beat my meat Indian Style.
Oh, and like Bill said your story sucked, it used too many words...
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Traumatised Marine
2:10 pm | January 19, 2003
Due to problems with a scanner, I was unable to give in some illustration to go with chapter 3, I don't know if HBO is able to put it in chptr 3 after they've posted it, so if anyone wants it then e-mail me (rbecalick@hotmail.com) and I'll send it to them.
It's a hand-drawn picture of the Sarge in mid leap over the boulder after Kennedy's foot launch, trying to startle the three Grunts advancing on them.
Cheers
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Phat Bob
8:08 am | January 19, 2003
This is a great series man, I hope you continue for a long time.
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moniter101
2:37 am | January 19, 2003
To Bill I'll fuck u up if you dis on this series mofo.
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moniter101
2:37 am | January 19, 2003
I love this series.
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Bean
11:53 pm | January 18, 2003
Sorry about that I am having broswer problems.
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Bean
11:14 pm | January 18, 2003
This series is one of the best so far!
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Bean
11:14 pm | January 18, 2003
This series is one of the best so far!
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Traumatised Marine
8:19 pm | January 18, 2003
You had to show a little patience with that chapter, I want UtSC to fill in the background of the Marines movements and objectives and give a believable story to explain why the Marines are where they are throughout the game in a deeper kind of way, if you get me. As well as telling the story of the Sarge
Despite this was part of the actual game from a different perspective, I couldn't just skim over that large part with the Chief and the life pods and the BANG BANG!! etc, etc.
I've sent chapter 4, it has Sarge mentally scarring a Tech, everyone sees Mc's real face, a heart-to-heart between Seargents Daux and Johnson
as well as sodomy, rape and drugs!
Well... it has most of the above.
Phew, that was a wordy comment!
Mmm... Testicles... sucked...
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Guilty Spark
8:17 pm | January 18, 2003
Excellent! I look forward to the next chapter.
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hornet34
8:08 pm | January 18, 2003
very good
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Goldie
5:10 pm | January 18, 2003
Ignore Bill. I, for one, am glad that you continued. It's very good, despite a few grammatical errors. I sincerely can't wait for the next part.
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Bill
4:52 pm | January 18, 2003
Lick my testicles, your story sucked...
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