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Comments for 'Under the sergeant's cap (chapter 2)' |
Bean
10:36 pm | January 18, 2003
cool story, it realy puts you "under the sergeant's cap" !
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Vero
12:11 pm | January 18, 2003
Wow, great f-n job. Nice to see you like action as much as I do. Keep going, you are doing great.
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Reclaimer343
2:06 am | January 17, 2003
Damn good shit. This chapters really well done compared to some other stuff I've read......Keep it comin'. i'm tellin you the Sarge is Da shit!
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NobleWard
5:23 am | January 16, 2003
Really great story. The fight scenes are great and really intense while the dialogue between characters is realistic. Impressive.
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Lord Prozen
11:10 pm | January 15, 2003
It was intense...
I liked it... However I think you should try to make seperate paragraphs every time a character speaks, it makes the dialogue easier to read.
Great story though.
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Guilty Spark
2:48 am | January 15, 2003
Without a doubt, the best damn chapter I have read to date. Keep up the good work. I think many of us will be eagerly awaiting the next.
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moniter101
10:45 pm | January 14, 2003
Awasome I loved it can't wait for the next one!!!
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Orome
4:18 pm | January 14, 2003
Even better than the first! Keep it up!
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