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Comments for 'Under the sergeant's cap (chapter 1)' |
Vero
12:11 pm | January 18, 2003
Wow, more and more new people post here everyday. I remember when there were only like 10 people that posted here. That was near the begining when Halo started. Anywayz, great going T. Mar, I like you story, it kept me reading till the end. Definatly continue this series.
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Traumatised Marine
9:26 pm | January 15, 2003
Cheers for your feedback, all of you, I don't know how much of it was just friendly encouragement, but I'm going to tweak it up and the following chapters should get better and better.
Oh, and to 'anonymous', I had a great laugh picturing the sort of saddact you must be to get half your kicks from posting crap twentyfourseven.
Go play with your one-eyed monster you little tosser, it's the only thing that likes you for what you are!!!
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Bean
4:59 pm | January 15, 2003
Yo anonymous shut up and get the hell out of here!
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Knightmare(MM
5:01 am | January 14, 2003
Anus, you have the mind of a pre-era hive drone... One track in the least.
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Hunterkilla
11:37 pm | January 13, 2003
Really good start. I'll admit I dont read fan-fics very often, but yours some how caught my eye. The sarge is da man! ;) Keep it up.
Anonymous- Shut up, stop being a hermaphrodite and crawl back to the cardboard box you came from.
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Anonymous
11:24 pm | January 13, 2003
"someone tell that anonymous person to shut the fuck up shit hes annoying"
You have the grammatical and spelling skills of a pre pubescent child...
I recommend going back and nursing with your mother...
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Orome
3:45 pm | January 13, 2003
I think this will make an interesting series. I will enjoy reading your next chapter; good work!
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moniter101
2:19 am | January 13, 2003
someone tell that anonymous person to shut the fuck up shit hes annoying.
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Anonymous
10:27 pm | January 12, 2003
you guys r right i should shut up and go fuck my mom some more cya
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Hikaru-119
8:37 pm | January 12, 2003
Nice first fan fic. It at least burned some of my boredom up.
Now as for Anonymous...who really cares about your opinion if it's only,
"Your story sucked...It used too many words..."
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Bob Lucas
8:28 pm | January 12, 2003
TO: Anonymous
YOU Suck!!!
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hornet34
6:49 am | January 12, 2003
Nice, Good all around. the jump from the sarge to other people can be slightly misleading, but thats understandable. Overall, keep up the good work. Look forward to the next chapter.
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Bean
4:11 am | January 12, 2003
Hey that was a great story,not bad for your first fan fic! I swear that anonymous person is writing that same shit everywhere.
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Guilty Spark
3:38 am | January 12, 2003
Nice job. I enjoy stories that capture what went unseen before or after a particular moment in time. I look forward to your next chapter.
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Anonymous
9:51 pm | January 11, 2003
Your story sucked...
It used too many words...
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Goldie
6:18 pm | January 11, 2003
Hey...very nice. Despite a few mechanical errors, there's not much I can complain about. Please, continue!
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