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Comments for 'Koranus VII - Chapter 1' |
russ687
1:21 am | May 25, 2004
Good story. If you want this to be a series, you should probably give some background on your characters sometime soon.
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MC's Cousin
7:03 pm | May 23, 2004
Or, Helljumper, tell him to use the code. But yes, "the code" is the major component that you lack. With it, you can do what Helljumper already mentioned, and add half-rules instead of lots of dashes.
Helljumper did say just about all that was woth saying, but I repeated it for enphasis. Oh, and capitalize ranks.
Signing Off
MCC
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Helljumper
3:48 pm | May 23, 2004
Pretty good story. I hope the ODST go in by HEV. you need to use [i]ship name[/i]. this is a good intro story, you should proof read to make sure that everything flows the way you want it to. also indent [indent]
ODST
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