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Comments for 'Chapter 4, Hell’s Bells' |
The Silver Spartan
1:17 am | April 25, 2004
Thanks FOrunnER, the part about throwing numbers around you are right I will try to be more realistic next time.
As for that end part: You're a poet and you didn't even know it! As for me, I hate to rhyme it wastes my time!
The Silver Spartan
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FOrunnER
1:15 am | April 24, 2004
Very nice, your style of writing improved with each chapter. It was very nice, however I didn't like the way you seemingly 'threw numbers around' and you were a little vauge on the Alien artifacts
But other than that it was good, it gets a grade B from me (hehe, that ryhmed).
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The Silver Spartan
12:43 am | April 23, 2004
Actually the next story will be submitted monday!
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The Silver Spartan
11:20 am | April 22, 2004
Thanks Gre... I mean Cyclopsjr57 I appreciate it! Chapter 5 wil be out within two weeks!
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Cyclopsjr57
7:01 pm | April 21, 2004
good job silver I really liked your stories
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The Silver Spartan
2:08 am | April 11, 2004
Thanks Ross, I really appreciate your comment and BTW DO NOT read the "No Other Alternitive" series, it will make you cry.
I am so glad someone likes my stories. PS: I love the "Moral Redemption of Doctor Halsey" series you are writing!
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Ross Becalick
11:35 am | April 10, 2004
That flows really well, an ease to read and entertaining.
My creed at the moment is to only comment on the ones that make me read all the way through, and I get easily distracted!
Goody-good!
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