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Comments for 'Scope (Chapter 3, The Day Hell Froze Over)'



Cyclopsjr57
7:19 pm | April 5, 2004
Good job ScootySaleen
Joe Ehret
4:26 pm | April 1, 2004
Great story. I liked the whole series, but like Helljumper said proofing it would make it even better.
SOS.Odin
9:02 pm | March 31, 2004
surprised more folk dont read ur stuff
ya just need to do what Helljumper says
and ur good to go
Helljumper
2:45 am | March 31, 2004
Thats a really good story. I like how u make the Covenant military tacticans. My only advice would be to proof read it because there was some grammer and confusion in sentence structure

ODST
First to rise, last to fall
Helljumpers do it all

Feet first into hell


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