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Comments for 'The Battle of Berlin Colony'



The Scribe
12:12 am | June 30, 2003
To Ishkabibbl: Yeah, I meant the next two parts. By the way, the next part is called Attack on Central Command.
Steele
10:35 pm | June 29, 2003
I liked it, which is rare enough these days...
Ishkabibbl
8:00 pm | June 29, 2003
How can you have two sequels? Or do you mean the next two parts?
The Scribe
7:17 pm | June 29, 2003
Ive two sequels on the way right now. I hope they're as good as the first!
The Scribe
7:17 pm | June 29, 2003
To Saturn: Its ok. Thanks for the comment.
saturn
6:36 pm | June 29, 2003
ooooh. i get it now. so its not really the scar hes famous for, its the other stuff. the scar is just...um...identifying? ok. im a really shallow reader sometimes. maybe it just didnt come out clear to me the first time. keep it up dude!
The Scribe
5:58 pm | June 28, 2003
Thanks for all your comments and advice. This was my first Halo story I've ever written, so it may not be that great.


To Saturn: Becasue of his deadly battle tactics and admiration from the Prophets.
Hunter_Killer
11:47 am | June 28, 2003
Two things: (1) Yay! Hunters killed! KILL ALL HUNTERS!!! (2) Excellent stroy, exept for grammar. 9.8/10
saturn
8:42 pm | June 27, 2003
i find it very hard to believe that an elite is easily identified because he survived a SCAR. Of all the elites being blown up and scrapped, why does the one with a scar become so notorious?
Havok
8:35 pm | June 27, 2003
Cougar, you need to look back a few pages at some of the stuff written before. namely Shadows of Archon by Wado. i did like the story though
Corey Lyon(Cougar)
7:46 pm | June 27, 2003
Well this was very interesting. I didn't expect to see someone writing about a covenant soldier. You are one of the first. Very well wirtten a few grammatical errors but none the less a 9.5/10


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