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Comments for 'Miracle's do Happen ( part one)'



The One and Only Noob
4:26 pm | July 2, 2004
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Dave Luck
9:34 pm | June 24, 2004
One word: n00b.

I don't care. Too hard to read. Not worth my time.

- Dave Luck.
343 Salty Beans
12:25 am | June 24, 2004
Too many punctuation errors, grammar errors, and formatical errors to ignore-and you didn't use the code!

343SB
The NEW Zak
5:18 pm | June 21, 2004
You hate the word nOOb? You are a nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb. nOOb.
The Lonesome Grunt
3:45 pm | June 21, 2004
Hey
Elliott2020
2:13 pm | June 21, 2004
hello
Sean
12:56 am | June 21, 2004
Ahhhh shit I forgot to use indent on my story that I just wrote for here.
SeverianofUrth
12:41 am | June 21, 2004
Romac, don't say that. I had to guess what indent might be too. I actually didn't know what it did (I always referred to it as 'tab')until I used it.
Sean
10:44 pm | June 20, 2004
Story was nice but not smooth. Work on the grammar a bit more. It's a good story but it's not great.
romac1991
9:48 pm | June 20, 2004
*smacks forehead*

Christ on a friggin cracker Lonesome Grunt! Jesus, how the hell do you not know what the FUCK INDENT is. I mean that means right there that you failed second grade computer lab. But I'll tell you cuz i know yo gon ask again.
On the left side of the keyboard called, listen very carefully here it comes......TAB


romac1991
The Lonesome Grunt
7:32 pm | June 20, 2004
Please show me what indent is. I know i'm not the best auther but please give me the respect i deserve. AND DON'T CALL ME NOOB I HATE THAT WORD!
Nick Kang
1:17 pm | June 20, 2004
*Uses ultra super psychic powers*

The story was called 'Life of a Marine' on page eight!

The story was rpetty good, but I've seen much better.

NK
Nick Kang
1:12 pm | June 20, 2004
*uses ultra super memory*

I think the Gangsta Pimp Daddy battle was on a story by one: 'Mjolnir Wearer"

My ultra super memory can't recall what the story was called.

NK
The NEW Zak
1:35 am | June 20, 2004
OH. MY. GOD! You don't know what [indent] means! I'm with JJiggssaw on this, if anymore nOObs swarm on this site,(Or at least people who don't even know what the code is), i'll be going to Battleground: Halo. I miss the old days with authors like GLADIATRRR2003 and Black Valkaire, ya know, authors like that. We still have some authors like that, but not enough. Oh, and a question for anyone who wants to answer it, do any of you know the exact time the nOOb Invasion began? I'm going to start putting a sig on my posts to show that it is me.


The NEW Zak
The Lonesome Grunt
9:36 pm | June 19, 2004
Alright Black titan i'll remember that.
The Lonesome Grunt
9:34 pm | June 19, 2004
Yes it is part of a series but i'd rather it if you read Help is on the way it's an edited version of Miracles do Happen.
Kaizen
5:45 pm | June 19, 2004
Its pretty good is it a series??
JJiggssaw
10:51 am | June 19, 2004
Gangsta Pimp Daddy? If this place gets any more messed up, then Battleground: Halo will become my new Halo site. (Must... resist... the dark side...)
Bonecrusher
7:37 am | June 19, 2004
gangsta pimp daddy is romac1991


Bonecrusher
Solidus Snake
4:12 am | June 19, 2004
No...who the fuck is GangstaPimpDaddy anyways?
romac1991
3:47 am | June 19, 2004
hey does anyone remember what story's comments page had that big battle with GangstaPimpDaddy?


romac1991
Solidus Snake
10:59 pm | June 18, 2004
Uh...I'm still here, Alpha Lance, just using a different name. Good to hear from you Wado.
Wado
10:30 pm | June 18, 2004
I know its been a while but...I'm back and planning to write another story, haven't yet decided. But I am moving soon, so I might not. How has everyone been, like all the old writers back when I was writing here?
Solidus Snake
10:01 pm | June 18, 2004
Uh... I wasn't over reacting.
Black Titan
9:27 pm | June 18, 2004
it was okay. but you copied some things from the halo2 traile, like the with all do respect.... quote.
Elliott2020
9:11 pm | June 18, 2004
Don't over reacted Solidus Snake, he knows what to do know, I showed him.
Solidus Snake
6:45 pm | June 18, 2004
Sad... you don't know what indent is or does? My God. What is this world coming too?
INDUSTRIAL_aVATAR
6:02 pm | June 18, 2004
uh, this is okay. (dont worry, i didnt know wat the code was before, and my story pretty good)
Elliott2020
1:46 pm | June 18, 2004
[b]test test[/b]
shai
1:14 pm | June 18, 2004
Ah... html tags cannot be seen, but they don't work
shai
1:03 pm | June 18, 2004
just testing: if this dosen't slide across the screen HTML tags don't work here. Otherwise if you don't see the tags and it dosen't work, get IE.
Elliott2020
12:34 pm | June 18, 2004
Good story, good imagination, UNLESS YOUR COPYING SOMEBODY, but I doubt it.
Elliott2020
12:14 pm | June 18, 2004
It sounds like a Christmas movie.
The Lonesome Grunt
12:12 pm | June 18, 2004
actually there not the same not exactly at least
Jet
12:09 pm | June 18, 2004
Well, first of all, the code. It was a pain to read. This is the millionth time, read the instructions before you submit your story!

Secondly, the story was lacking detail. You should read some other stories and look how they describe things.

Third, the grammar. I saw lots of spelling errors in your story.

Is this your first story? If so, this is descent. Practice makes perfect.
romac1991
12:09 pm | June 18, 2004
you got to be kidding me, you dont know what indent is? Oh my f****** god.


romac1991
romac1991
12:09 pm | June 18, 2004
no code...bad



romac1991
The Lonesome Grunt
12:05 pm | June 18, 2004
Hello everybody
The Lonesome Grunt
12:05 pm | June 18, 2004
Whats indent
Elliott2020
12:03 pm | June 18, 2004
[indent], [b] [/b] and [i] [i/].
The Lonesome Grunt
12:02 pm | June 18, 2004
DONT READ THIS ONE I ACCIDENTLY MADE TWO EXACTLY
THE SAME READ "Help is on the way"
IT'S ALOT BETTER
The Lonesome Grunt
12:02 pm | June 18, 2004
Please like my story.


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