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Comments for 'THE QUEST FOR FREEDOM Chapter 2 Memories of Reach' |
el_halo_diablo
2:13 am | October 12, 2002
oops. i meant to do that thing.
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el_halo_diablo
2:06 am | October 12, 2002
Hey! I'm the real diablo! Why are you listening to...H H I MM MMH H I M M M MH H I M M M MH H I M M M MH H I M M MHHHHHHHH I M MH H I M MH H I M MH H I M MH H I M M ?
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a flying chicken
11:51 am | October 7, 2002
penguin
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ryan westfall
1:32 am | October 7, 2002
well, lol if you think it was boring, tough shit, hould have read the authors note, if you want all action watch a cheesy van damme flick, if you want real stories read the awesome fan fiction here, your choice, but if yer an action hound, sucks to be you then doesnt it
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some guy
10:21 pm | October 6, 2002
tanks i might do that
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el_halo_diablo
9:14 pm | October 6, 2002
ok but really I really want this idiot to stop immitating people, cause its pretty dumb, and we could even tell when it's you, so you're not even tricking anyone lol. Go ahead and immitate people but I'm just saying it's pretty gay and no one really cares what you say lol. but really....comeon.
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el_halo_diablo (Ian)
9:09 pm | October 6, 2002
yah no problem Ryan Westfall(this imposter is a serious loser lol). Oh yah, hey some guy, just click on my name on my story, and you will be able to email me.
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Anonymous
8:51 pm | October 6, 2002
It sucks because it's boring. Sorta like the Val and Cortana parts in shadows of Archon. But it sucks, okay?
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ryan westfall
5:45 pm | October 6, 2002
if it sucks tell me why it sucks :P btw if yer just some action freak then its not your story to read then is it? if it sucks tell me why, back it up, or how is it gonna get betteR?
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Anonymous
5:31 pm | October 6, 2002
It sucks...
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ryan westfall
4:53 pm | October 6, 2002
yo Ian, thanx for stickin up for me, and whatever that imposter of me is doing is pissing me off, i have his winsock ID should i delete his hard drive? im not sure, last time i did i got in trouble, anyways dont beleive the imposter, everyone can tell weather or niot whos the real guy, i dont say i hate you out of the blue. anyways thanx to everyone for reading my story
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Havok
4:46 pm | October 6, 2002
jest thought i'd let all of ya know
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helljumper/Havok
4:42 pm | October 6, 2002
hey everyone, i decided Havok is a much better name than helljumper. so now all my stuff is gonna say written by havok
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some guy
4:10 pm | October 6, 2002
hey el halo diablo write another comedy since this the newist story and i dont have your e mail i thout u might read this comment tanks
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thasupaman
3:41 pm | October 6, 2002
I hate you, el_halo_diablo. I friggin' hate you.
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gruntkiller
12:14 pm | October 6, 2002
you have some good ideas that colud be used in a much more effective way
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el_halo_diablo
4:26 am | October 6, 2002
ok you really have no life if you try to immitate people...i mean relly...
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thasupaman
2:49 am | October 6, 2002
My story sucks
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cactus joe
10:37 pm | October 5, 2002
it sucks
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thasupaman
3:47 pm | October 5, 2002
ty for the info, i always like honest opinions :D, sorry about the spelling but its been a long week and i only went over once
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helljumper
2:20 pm | October 5, 2002
all in all, a pretty good story so far. i just have one suggestion: you have a few spelling mistakes that the spellcheck probably won't pick up. before you submit your chapters, read over them once more. you will pick up most mistakes. the one i really noticed was: "if it is any constellation, i lost my older brother." that should be "consolation" not "constellation." not really a biggie, but you will find out most of us point out the small things.i think this could be a really good story. keep it up.
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