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Comments for 'THE QUEST FOR FREEDOM Prologue'



Wado
4:01 am | September 24, 2002
I thought this story was pretty good. Keep it up.
ryan westfall
1:06 am | September 24, 2002
but thanx for the feedback though! i greatly appreciate it, my friends dont care about HALO
Ryan Westfall
1:01 am | September 24, 2002
heh, you really think so eh? well i guess you gotta wait and see if i used all my stuff. lol hell, eric nylund introed the mc in the second fucking sentence in his book and his book was an awesome piece of work. Just because i didnt wait til i finished half the story to inrto the chief doesnt mean im already out of the great ideas. just wait til you see what the covenant do ::grows devil horns and smiles wickedly::
el_halo_diablo
12:59 am | September 24, 2002
yah I figured. I tried to introduce MC to my story half the way through on my series that i finished a little while ago.(I introduced him in a fashon that perfectly matches with the trailer. I just had the story the perfect place at the perfect time!). Yah i was afraid that you put too much good stuff into the prologe. anyways, keep it up.
thasupaman8 (Ryan Westfall)
9:59 pm | September 23, 2002
Yeah this is my first, its the prologue of a long novel im going to be writing, chapter one will probably be a week from now. Thanx on the comment. :D btw this takes right after the HALO two trailer hence the MC being in the dropship
el_halo_diablo
2:24 am | September 23, 2002
yes! very good job. Is this your first story? I loved it!


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