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Comments for 'Tides of Destruction(Part 1, The Cavelry)'



teemus
1:30 am | December 24, 2003
Sorry about the title guys, its supposed to be part 4, and sorry about the Cavalry part i wrote the title in a rush.
Awacar
8:12 pm | December 23, 2003
It was good, still odd to publish chap. one after two and three. I've liked the story in all of the chapters belonging to this fic, and this one is NOT an exeption.

The thing I'll write next I'll probably be regretting tomorrow, since I've got very annoyed this evening, but when I got halfway through the story, I got tired of reading "Briggs" in the beginning of too many sentences.

Good story, but didn't really put up with chapter two and three.
Awacar
8:12 pm | December 23, 2003
Sorry about the last post, when I look through it again for finding how many times the Briggs occured in the start of sentences, it wasnt that many. But the name ,in my oppinion, was used too frequently. My best excusions about the last post.
CoLd BlooDed
7:34 pm | December 23, 2003
USE THE CODE! Lol, maybe that'll remind ya.

Good story, but next time spell the title right.

"Cavalry". 7/10
Mainevent
7:18 pm | December 23, 2003
Cavalry
Blue Dude
5:53 pm | December 23, 2003
Nice story.Just make it a little longer.


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