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Comments for 'Air Force Wing: Part 4, One Way Ticket to Hell' |
teemus
6:18 pm | February 15, 2004
The marines were in suites, I think i forgot to mention that. He was talking to them by radio, and sorry for the lack of detail, I wrote this chapter in a rush. Awacar, say what you want, after all everybody has thier own opinion.
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MC's Cousin
12:33 pm | February 15, 2004
Well I was a bit confused by the space action. Like the mystery "shimmer" but the people thing was confusing. Was the unconcious pilot in a suit? Where the marines? After all you did have the hatch drop open. How did the main character talk to the marines? Radio? You need to get on those types of details.
Signing Off
MCC
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Awacar
7:43 am | February 15, 2004
This series have been great before, let me sink into it and things like that. But this one only let me float on top. I think this was a big dive for your series, sorry, but thats my oppinion.
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