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Comments for '102nd Recon Division: The Covenant Homeworld: Part 2'

11:13 am | July 21, 2004
"I need volunteers. Constance, Ashton, Keener, Roy Dean. Come with me." he ordered. The marines followed their orders.

that by the way is not asking for volunteers at all. , and the one who sucked ass at writing did well, without him your story would fall apart.

6/10, man that was bad. Use the code, and work on it!!!!!!!
3:07 pm | July 17, 2004
Yeah. If you ever made an excuse, make it something that is reasonable. Late at night isn't a good excuse. I've wrote things that some people that I know like to read, and wrote them around four a.m.

I couldn't pay attention to the story after the first sentence. It just didn't catch my attention.
11:08 am | July 17, 2004
You know this whole making up excuses thing, like: It was a night, we were tired, its because of gallagher, we aint no super writers. It just ain't working. Make an effort, not and excuse.

Team Halo
5:49 pm | July 16, 2004
gallagher didn't write that

we kinda kicked him out of the story

the tired of writing thing was because we wrote that at night, becuz we had to

and can some plz find out why didn't they post the first part?
3:30 pm | July 16, 2004
Yea wat russ and MCC said.

MC's Cousin
2:54 pm | July 16, 2004
Well, due to my extreme case of ADHD, I wasn't able to pay attention to that. In reality, however, after I saw that first little passage at the top, I decided that I wouldn't continue onward.
If you don't feel like writing, then you shouldn't be. Don't make excuses and say "that's why some of us aren't writing well today."
*MCC spits at author(s)* You discust me!

Signing Off

12:45 pm | July 16, 2004
Yesssssssssssss, i agree with romac...

11:22 am | July 16, 2004
Oh yeah, and after reading it, I would have to say that the "writer who sucks ass" wrote the best passage overall.

11:20 am | July 16, 2004
You really shouldn't put whose part it is every time it changes. I mean its like you guys want to show people how good and bad each persons writing skills are, I mean if you just put it all together, who know. Oh yeah, you didn't use the code.