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Comments for 'Halo 2: Operation Dream Knife (Chapter 1: Hallway)'



MadJackal
4:28 pm | April 12, 2004
I think that Awacar meant it to be absurd, merely emphasizing that there is no way that that was really Stuntmutt.
Helljumper
1:55 am | April 12, 2004
Awacar that was a dumb statement i think you messed it up.
Awacar
4:53 pm | April 11, 2004
If that is Stuntmutt himself speaking, and not an imposter, I'm a piece of Grunt chased by a piece of plasma grenade swarm and running into a million Flood infection forms.
Stuntmutt
3:48 pm | April 11, 2004
Dude. stop writing fan fiction. your stuff is crap
Helljumper
4:37 am | April 11, 2004
really good story, and unique. my own comment is that you should read over it for grammer and flow. There were sentence problems here and there.

ODST
Burny
8:15 pm | April 10, 2004
Hehehe, MUCH better then your other story. I liked this one.

9.6/10
MadJackal
7:15 pm | April 10, 2004
I'm guessing by the title that you're a Ghost Recon fan like I am :). Good story, keep up the good work.
System Failure
1:51 pm | April 10, 2004
Yes, I have gunned down many a terrorist with the MP5's scope in Rainbow Six. I think the scope thing is mostly about the lenght of the barrel. If the gun is meant to be held with two hands it will ahve a scope, like the MP5. But if it is made for one hand, even if modded for two hands it will have no scope (Ingram, Tmp, ect.)
Blue Jaguar
1:41 pm | April 10, 2004
some SMGs even today have scopes, if halo made the SMG how it really should be, the gun wouldn't be shaking around like it is, its designed for easy control and aiming in automatic fire. the MP5 SMG often comes with a scope, especially in the spec ops versions.
Wiley
1:23 pm | April 10, 2004
Much improvement you have made.


9/10
3:39
11:18 am | April 10, 2004
Good, nice suspense and tense writing!
Nick Kang
10:23 am | April 10, 2004
Woops, forgot to rate.

9.5/10
Nick Kang
10:21 am | April 10, 2004
Good story. Good amount of detail, especially while describing the camo Elite. But other than for thermal and night vision, why woud an SMG have a scope? If you tried to shoot something from long range, the gun would shake too violently and miss whatever you're shooting at.


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