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Comments for 'Halo 2: Jupiter (Chapter 2)'



Spartan415
1:39 am | July 21, 2002
hasn't he been doing the news on the main page so he must've gotten it by now and i sent mine in yesterday but hes proboably gonna post it tommorrow
Arch
11:08 am | July 20, 2002
Oh yeah, i did send in part VII, but i'm wondering if Louis recieved it and hasn't had time to post it yet, or if he's just trying to teach me a lesson for getting into all those fights....
saturn
8:29 am | July 20, 2002
I thought he's been back. whatever. he never got it anyways. Whetehr or not he's home, it would still be in the inbox, waiting to be read. I asked him personally and he never got it. I never got a delevery failure message. Even if so, the count as well as others have access to the box.
Nike
1:39 am | July 20, 2002
Hey didn't Louis say that when HBO changed servers that he would be OUT OF TOWN. Just ta let ya know.
saturn
1:24 am | July 20, 2002
He didn't get my epilogue the first time. Hmm. coincidence???
Arch
10:51 pm | July 19, 2002
*Flings his arms around Spartan415 and Lynnada* Man, it just wouldn't be the Fanfic section of HBO without you two!
saturn
8:29 pm | July 19, 2002
Huh, Where Am I? Dont worry about what I think, you 2 are my buddys. Terrans are cool, that's why I'm saving them. Tip of the day: watch GATTACA, great sci-fi movie, definitelly worth your time.
saturn
8:29 pm | July 19, 2002
whatever. Group Hug! sike. get away from me. (haha just joking)
Spartan415
2:04 pm | July 19, 2002
oh yeah and i'm waiting for those next chapter u 2 I got mine i just have the stories on a crappy comp that never connects.
Spartan415
2:04 pm | July 19, 2002
shutup u two, one saturn u really like to talk about terrans on this comment board for some reason(dont know why) and arch u make great comments and always get into fights on comments(kinda funny though). so archtake your side on the colonies and saturn go for the terrans but me personally have to go with arch and u. /yes it is kinda generic aand no casualties and very glorified but i have to go with arch that terrans are overglorified (no offense saturn).
Arch
11:51 am | July 19, 2002
Terrans. Uuuugh. I myself, being an etherial being, have to side with the colonies on this one. I've seen it all, and i think that the Terrans are far too overglorified. Man, you've gotta get a massacre or something in here that adds lifelike quality to it. Noone wins all the time.
Arch
12:39 am | July 19, 2002
*uncaring sound here* so what. Your series is good, and that's all that really counts, isn't it?
saturn
12:36 am | July 19, 2002
ok, so i am an earthling. But life sucks and shit happens here so that's why I daydream about saturn.
saturn
7:39 pm | July 18, 2002
This is a little generic in your style. You are ALWAYS glorified and suffer few casualties and I dubb this style "terran". Terran means generic, it means always "sir, yes sir" and "attention on deck!". It's militaristic in appearance yet does not accuratelly represent the fouls of battle. You want to impress readers with your ideas, and that's good, but remember that covenant vessels have defenses and detection systems. Plasma should be streaking towards your position.
Vegeta
6:59 pm | July 18, 2002
A another nice and interesting chapter.
shadow_hunter
6:20 pm | July 18, 2002
Great story. Little mistakes. Tarsonis, did you get that from Starcraft?
Spartan415
6:12 pm | July 18, 2002
good job, I like how this series is going, keep it coming.
Nike
3:50 pm | July 18, 2002
This was good. Some mistakes but good overall.


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