Comments for 'An Unfortunate Chain of Events'
12:43 am | June 30, 2004
Lol, that was cool.
6:34 pm | June 29, 2004
I really like how you ended it, it makes the entire poem a little more meaningful.
12:48 pm | June 29, 2004
That's happened to me before...
2:02 am | June 29, 2004
12:32 am | June 29, 2004
nice, with all of the whole chain and stuff
10:33 pm | June 28, 2004
That was awesome.
7:59 pm | June 28, 2004
I actually got an idea from another poem where it was something like:
For want of a nail, a horshoe was lost.
For want of a horshoe, a horse and its rider was lost.
For want of a rider, a charge was lost...
And on it went. I've never actually read the poem, but I did the best I could.
7:48 pm | June 28, 2004
I liked it. It's true how something so small can cause the most amazing or disastrous things to happen. Very original.
7:33 pm | June 28, 2004
I liked that a lot. That was really creative and good.
7:08 pm | June 28, 2004
I LIKE IT!!!