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Comments for 'The Pelican'



Slayer Boi
9:25 am | June 2, 2004
I found it kinda relaxing
romac1991
5:54 am | June 2, 2004
pelicans dont have ramps
Helljumper
3:52 pm | June 1, 2004
good one

ODST
JJiggssaw
3:14 pm | June 1, 2004
Not bad. Not good. Don't quit your day job. On the other hand I realise you got bored...so I can sort-of forgive you...but this is a terrible from some of the stuff you write.
Solidus Snake
5:54 pm | May 30, 2004
Thats pretty good, nice job.
Nick Kang
4:37 pm | May 30, 2004
I'm not gonna submit anything to the competition...I wouldn't get very far in it.

The poem was cool, good rhymes.

NK
Sterfrye36
4:10 pm | May 30, 2004
I got bored, okay?
Agent Shade
1:17 pm | May 30, 2004
lol, flowed nicely, but it was so simple...good idea to exclude it from the competition


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