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Comments for 'The Defense of Earth 1: The 889th Tactical Fighter Wing'



monitor101
1:39 am | March 18, 2003
The marines can't get all the glory!
Traumatised Marine
7:00 pm | March 17, 2003
It's just such a well written piece of fic, I don't know what constructive comment to make... brilliant.
AlphaBravo343
12:45 pm | March 17, 2003
All i can say is......KICK ASS!!!!!!, you really captured the feel of a fighter pilot. Cant wait for chapter 2!!!
wildebeestnz
8:01 am | March 17, 2003
this is a really good story mate, i hope you keep the ball rolling!

i also think your writing style itself is v. good quality.

cheers
beest
Steele
1:09 am | March 17, 2003
Realized I made a mistake in the missile count. 24 missiles launched and Forty kills. Hmmmm...multiplier affect going on there. Oh well let's just say the Seraphs had some collisions when intiating Missile avoidance maneuvers.

Oh... Thanks ALphsBravo343(That's gotta be a ***** to type every time) I'm hard at work on Chapter 2


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