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Comments for 'The Lost Spartan (Chapter 8 - Old friend)'



saturn
6:57 pm | July 21, 2002
this started getting confusing in the middle but it was cool. Yeah! Grunt, It's What's For Dinner.
Spartan415
6:05 pm | July 21, 2002
i've been telling u that i'm trying but it's kinda ahabit to me.
Arch
4:37 pm | July 21, 2002
Uh, my friend, it was a little rushed. I couldn't really tell where this Jake character was coming from. However, i enjoyed the ingenuity you put into getting rid of the Hunters. It's the little things like a well-placed headshot that really add to the story. Keep at it, and slow down a bit, man.


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