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Comments for 'The Lost Spartan (Chapter 10 - New Hope)'



Knightmare
1:33 am | August 10, 2002
we could always use the fuel rod gun thing as an oven or something... roasted grunt anyone?
Arch
1:57 pm | August 9, 2002
Too true! What if the spikes are really parts of the Hunter itself, though? they'd rot, or something.
saturn
6:12 am | August 9, 2002
and those hunters have the metal spikes on their back. i can break off a few and use them as chop sticks.
Arch
4:46 pm | August 8, 2002
And eat it with Hunter Plate forks!
saturn
7:17 am | August 8, 2002
and we can cook the meat on some thermal hunter armor plates (i forget where the heat armor came from, sombody's fic).
ssjbrk
1:33 am | August 8, 2002
And the marine gets himself a slice, not bad at all.
saturn
9:56 pm | August 6, 2002
dude, why did you have to step on the hunter. well hes dead anyways. good job.
Spartan415
4:30 pm | August 6, 2002
well my next chap is gonna be the last one so i'l have more time to work on my other series. One more thing, Arch get on msn ok.
Sarge
3:47 pm | August 6, 2002
Your getting there keep it up man.
Arch
12:30 pm | August 6, 2002
Man, you two should work together more often. Spartan415's stories would come out even better because of it! Man, im glad i'm working with you two.
Knightmare Wolf
6:48 am | August 6, 2002
I myself saw a couple errors in editing.. so if they sound like errors that i would make bitch at me! lol, that said, I found your story, when i edited it; to be fairly good, a nice change rom those really fast paced ones that made almost no sense switching from point a to point three million and back again without slightest respite. Good story 415, keep 'em coming.


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