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Comments for 'The Fall Of Reach (poem)'



el_halo_diablo
10:07 pm | December 11, 2002
*snoring*-what?...oh yah...um, good rhyming*goes back to sleep*
Neco Divad
9:45 am | December 11, 2002
That was great. Are you going to make on for on Halo? That rymed very well and fit in with the story. Keep it up, I couldn't find any major problems needing fixing.
Random Hero
1:00 am | December 11, 2002
this was good, way to long for a poem though, shorten it up some and it'd be ok...

one more thing, some of the lines made no sense to me, seemed like you put words in there for the sake of rhyming, a poem doesn't have to rhyme. yep, good luck if you make another one.


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