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Comments for 'Halo Haikus'



apache119
1:01 am | June 29, 2003
this is not worthy of this website.
Spookybanana29
7:10 pm | June 28, 2003
This is crap...i can't believe i wasted my time to read this...
gruntkiller
2:29 pm | June 28, 2003
great first hikus ive seen here and for the most part there good
Wow....
10:17 pm | June 27, 2003
Lol, actually, you missed the correct 575 pattern for the third one.
Wow...
10:15 pm | June 27, 2003
Most poems get 10 of 10.... I looks like you just wrote what looks like it fit in the sentance.... Rangers? The little ones are called infection forms...

Second was just dumb.... Sorry....

Third was critically flawed. I don't think that you are allowed to use (alliterations?) like ODST in a poem....

I think god though that you did get the 575 patter correct....
Corey Lyon (cougar)
7:44 pm | June 27, 2003
ok...well..its...different...i guess...
Comments
7:06 pm | June 27, 2003
What the fuck? That was a waste of time


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