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Comments for 'Perfection Parts 1-4'



Knightmare(MM
9:22 pm | October 28, 2002
I was impersonated...! MAn, I feel so... Hold on a minute at let me grab a loaded .45 . . .
Knightmare(MM
2:53 am | October 28, 2002
that made sense waaa waaa waaa waaa :( mommy i went potty in my pants
the mimic
2:51 am | October 28, 2002
that made no sense
Silent Giant
10:28 pm | October 26, 2002
lol look a freak that dosn't have a name...You think that Vincent Smith is my real name then you have problems because I wouldn't tell anyone my real name over the internet. Think of it as a pen name...if you know what that islol what an idiot
Sarge
8:36 pm | October 26, 2002
I know all.
Anonymous
5:49 pm | October 26, 2002
A freak who posts under his full name. It's DISGUSTING!!!
Vincent Smith
3:21 pm | October 26, 2002
Yeah I found that out right away!How did you know that my username at BGH is Silent Giant, Sarge?
Sarge
1:03 pm | October 26, 2002
Yeah were nicer here SG.
Knightmare(MM
2:13 am | October 26, 2002
Well I was about six and my parents lost me in the books isle... Took them a few hours but they eventually found me reading some... book.
Vincent Smith
12:50 am | October 26, 2002
Well This isn;t exactly Halo 2 but I have always wanted to create my onw story line for Halo and this is my first attemptHey thanks. I wanted to send my stories here because I post most of my stuff at Battle Ground Halo but they don't give me any feedback. I think I know what I need to work on thanks alot guys The next parts will be coming.Thanks again...
Sarge
10:42 pm | October 25, 2002
Gannon such a familiar sounding name.
the mimic
9:52 pm | October 25, 2002
(ha)(ha)(ha) oh and great story and knightmare(mm where did you get lost??
Knightmare(MM
7:24 pm | October 25, 2002
Rather interesting. I was a bit lost at a few points in the story, but I eventually picked those pointers up after reading it again. The wording was fair, not great, but still VERY readable.

In short, it looks like a first timer... I'm impressed. Great detail to the history, nice and brief too.

hipboy
6:14 pm | October 25, 2002
Its funny, you said, man is imperfect, they will make mistake" Its not serious, but I was LOL for like two minutes!!
Neco Divad
6:14 pm | October 25, 2002
Very, Very interesting. We've all been wondering just what happens after Halo 2. Heck, we haven't even played Halo 2 yet and we already want to know what happens.


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