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Comments for 'Attack on Sol (Part 13)'



Slit Throat
11:58 am | July 16, 2004
You could just hit the "Read Series" button next to the title, but part one is on page 17 about halfway down.
...Tartarus
7:21 pm | July 15, 2004
I see, Part 13. Where is Part 1?
...Tartarus
7:15 pm | July 15, 2004
Is this your first in the series? If it isn't, where is the first so that I can read the series from the beginning?
343 Salty Beans
2:29 am | July 12, 2004
Hooray! Me like!

343SB

PS: My comments are getting shorter due to my laziness. Sorry.
Slit Throat
6:23 pm | July 11, 2004
I almost regret doing that now, although Ackerson does have some tricks up his sleeve.

They will NOT however become evident for a while though, so don't jump on me if he seems a little… accepting… of being rescued by Spartans.
Chuckles
7:28 am | July 11, 2004
Great job . . . again. Ackerson gave the ending a good hook for the next installment, and not enough fanfic-series writers understand the importance of that. You have your work cut out for you though, seeing as your readership is begging you to turn the Masterchief into Dirty Harry and drill that "Punk" Ackerson. Good luck :)

C.T. Clown
Dave Luck
12:02 am | July 11, 2004
I have a bad feeling about the Colonel Ackerson...

Do you think he's going to hit the Chief? I hope the Chief plays 'WWF' with Ackerson. You know, I want to see the Chief climb a ring-post and body-slam Ackerson into submission.

- Dave.
Slit Throat
10:03 pm | July 10, 2004
I believe I already commented on it hunter. It was quite good.

Thanks all.
PHo
9:48 pm | July 10, 2004
oh shiiiet this is good stuff. MC better blow Ackerson away lol.
hunter_that_dances
9:20 pm | July 10, 2004
hey, slit throat, comment on chap 3 of urban warfare (it was in the last update) piz!!!!!
Slit Throat
7:35 pm | July 10, 2004
Part 12 is at the bottom of the page for anyone who wonders what happened to it.

BTW, I don't have an e-mail address and it really sucks. I'm getting one soon, so when I have it, I'll post it.

I'm putting a little twist in the next part, so be prepared.
hunter_that_dances
3:00 pm | July 10, 2004
GREAT AS ALWAYS!!!!!

like i said before, finish or be tracked


and give ur e-mail or im sn piz!!!!!!


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