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Comments for 'Attack on Sol (Part 12)'



Slit Throat
6:27 pm | July 13, 2004
It gets better.
Jessica
5:18 am | July 13, 2004
Good Job!! IMO, one of the best chapters in Attack on Sol...^.^ - So far that is...Heh, ^.^

-.-"

Jess
SpartanOmega
6:14 pm | July 11, 2004
Your story is very good as is your style of writing,it's fluid instead of choppy and mixed together.Good work.
Chuckles
9:27 am | July 11, 2004
Excellent. I am surprised at the lack of comments; this is one of the best written stories of the new batch. Your writing is easy and unforced. Great job.

C.T. Clown
hunter_that_dances
9:21 pm | July 10, 2004
most of them will probably post them in chap 13
Slit Throat
7:33 pm | July 10, 2004
Comments please!


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