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Comments for 'Spartan 5 Project' |
this sucks and blows
10:44 pm | October 5, 2002
this sucks and blows
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Cultivated Human
3:03 pm | July 8, 2002
mY S***, does this suck. IFFF you make a second part, make it WAAAAAY BEEEETer.
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Spartan 115
1:44 am | June 26, 2002
oops! i repeated that.
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Spartan 115
1:28 am | June 26, 2002
ok. for one thing its the year 2552 and its foe hammer not full hammer olso john didnt start out as a marine and its spartan 2 not spartan 5 AND the story did not start on halo.
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Spartan 115
1:24 am | June 26, 2002
ok. fist of all its spartan 2 not spartan5 and john didnt start as a marine its foe hammer not full hammer and the story did not start on halo
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Archangels Blade
11:38 am | June 22, 2002
who posted that in my name? Whoever it is, you're gonna get a boot lodged in yer ass!
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Sarge
6:50 pm | June 21, 2002
OKay Jehkoh I'm gonna try to make a new story and post it by tuesday Some brand spaking new stuff. But does this story really need to be bashed like this.
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Knightmare Wolf
6:27 pm | June 20, 2002
AAHH!! Dear god, get it away! I cant understand it, author, this needs a MAJOR OVERHAUL
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Archangels Blade
2:58 pm | June 19, 2002
I hate myself sooo much. I write worse than this!
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Archangels Blade
2:35 pm | June 17, 2002
Well, the no climax, or hanging point is a good thing. that could mean that there won't be another part to it. That's a good thing, because he's sparing us the torture of having to bash it to bits.
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TrueNike
10:26 pm | June 16, 2002
It sucks. As I always say to something that sucks or doesn't make sense:yep...there it goes. yep...his brain stopped.
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Sarge
9:14 pm | June 16, 2002
I hate the (Full Hammer): "Blah blah" format its like a script and I don't like reading stuff like that. Their was some bad grammar and spelling. I'd like to leave by saying Kapow Kapow lol it reminds me of the old Batman show.
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Archangels Blade
11:47 am | June 16, 2002
whoops
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Archangels Blade
11:27 am | June 16, 2002
Exactly. We have submitted new ideas, and Spartan415 and myself are currently working on new parts to our series'! I think they're pretty good, but that's just me. I still say that this needs one HELL of a lotta work if he wants to continue it.
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Archangels Blade
11:27 am | June 16, 2002
Exactly. We have submitted new ideas, and Spartan415 and myself are currently working on new parts to our series'! I think they're pretty good, but that's just me. I still say that this needs one HELL of a lotta work if he wants to continue it.
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Potato Flood
11:22 am | June 16, 2002
.....baka suck ass!
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Spartan415
2:15 am | June 16, 2002
I just read the last paragraph and noticed that it had no climax or hanging point.
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Spartan415
10:15 pm | June 15, 2002
most of us have
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Jehkoh
8:02 pm | June 15, 2002
Another thing (seeing as some of you guys have already written stories,) try writing one piece of a fresh idea. Don't use your already existing stories. Lets see you guys submit brand new spankin' stories here.
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Jehkoh
8:02 pm | June 15, 2002
I know this story wasn't the greatest.. I stopped reading after the first paragraph (I think,) BUT - BUT! It is not the worst. We've all seen stories that didn't even contain a single coherent word. This kid's just writin' down his war fantasy, so lay off. He had a good idea run sour, oh well. He's probably... Eleven? Why don't you guys turn in something better, then I'll let you fellas talk.
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Spartan415
7:55 pm | June 15, 2002
Dark Elite if I was you I would've let that guy take the blame for such a crappy story.
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Jaywhit10
6:09 pm | June 15, 2002
Oh My God, What The Heck Is This!!???????. I have never seen such crap in my life. I don't usually give this bad of a comment but in this case i made a BIG exception. Work on your grammer, storyline, dialogues, and the names. Proofread the next one of this series to the biggest extent possible, if there is even a next one. Please don't post another one like this without fixing it up.
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Archangels Blade
5:49 pm | June 15, 2002
Sorry Dark Elite, but he's right. It is pretty bad. You REALLY need to work on it if you planned on submitting this! REALLY needs work! REALLY!
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???
3:00 pm | June 15, 2002
WELL DARK ELITE, THE STORY STILL SUCKS ASS!
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THE DARK ELITE
1:42 am | June 15, 2002
MY NAME IS DEVIN SCHORAND THIS FUCK JAKE STOLE IT AND PUT IT UNDER A FRIENDS EMAIL!!!
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THE DARK ELITE
1:37 am | June 15, 2002
U SUCK THIS IS MY STORY AND U POSTED IT AS UR OWNTHIS IS MY STORY NOT HIS
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THE DARK ELITE
1:37 am | June 15, 2002
U FUCKIN PUSSY THIS IS MY STORY U WERNT SPOSE TO PUT IT OUT YET JAKE TOMMSON U FAGGOT
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Spartan415
8:18 pm | June 14, 2002
work on your grammer, a lot, and get a better story. sorry for the bad comment but this just sucks. retry your story on the next chapter if there is one.
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A GUY
3:05 pm | June 14, 2002
WHAT THE F---THIS SUCKS ASS
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A GUY
3:05 pm | June 14, 2002
??? WHAT THE F---THIS SUCKS ASS
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Archangels Blade
3:03 pm | June 14, 2002
Umm, what the hell is this? I usually try to post good, positive comments, but this is pretty hard to understand. Please, just do us a favor, and don't submit anything like this until you're SURE you have something that seems like a story, and not a psycotic script. Thanks.
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