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Comments for 'Rise To Honor - Part 17: Get Me Off This Forsaken Rock'

12:09 pm | August 22, 2002
yeah, teach them the old fasioned way.. They'll hum them to death
2:09 am | August 22, 2002
they should *GE*GE*GE* the shit outta the Spartans and that commander dude.
12:21 am | August 22, 2002
Nice story, i can't wait for the next one. I bet they are pissed
3:36 pm | August 21, 2002
wow wado....thats like the smallest comment ive seen from you lol.
10:24 pm | August 20, 2002
Nice action, keep going. Nothing else to say. I'm being pretty boring aren't I? Sorry.
5:13 pm | August 20, 2002
Yeah... Go Shadow.
4:03 pm | August 20, 2002
it was good. I see you toned down on the sound affects, which is good, but a little advice: I've seen a little too many metaphors(i.e. the sand bit into his skin) well that example wasnt in this one but i saw it about 4 or 5 times in the two parts before it. there were less annoying metaphors in this one. Keep it up and I hope to see a part....18???