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Comments for 'Rise To Honor - Part 13: In The Streets'

3:36 pm | August 6, 2002
Yes, always the rail gun.
12:52 pm | August 6, 2002
Its good. I liked it. But it was a little fast. Is Shadow still using his 'rail gun' from the other series?
1:19 am | August 5, 2002
any other questions about this chapter?
9:27 pm | August 4, 2002
Okay. Just wanted to know.
7:01 pm | August 4, 2002
Well, the Covenant will be playing a larger part in the next excursion of the Dark Wolves. And yes, I'm Chinese...quite americanized I'd have to add. :)
6:34 pm | August 4, 2002
Plus, you haven't mentioned the Covenant. Or have you?
6:34 pm | August 4, 2002
It is getting better. Just a thought [and it may sound stupid] but in your prologue it said that Shadow [meaning you] was Chinese. ARE you really Chinese or are you American?
1:05 pm | August 4, 2002
This is getting good, I like it a lot. I don't see any mistakes in it. Nice choice of music. I can't wait for the next part. Keep it up

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