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Comments for 'The Brute Mentality'

9:27 pm | July 13, 2004
Damn good story. Make more!
1:08 am | July 12, 2004
Thanks, all.

And sorry, this is a one-shot.
8:04 am | July 11, 2004
You are an excellent writer, Severian. I like the imagery you are fitting in here and there. It livens up your stories and keeps the reader involved. With very few words you gave the brute a real personality. It felt a bit stunted at the end, but other than that, great job.

C.T. Clown
2:58 am | July 11, 2004
"gods-damned"...haha i find that weirdly amusing..

this is a great story. clear and well written. looking foward to the rest of the series.
2:38 am | July 11, 2004
Great description. Awesome story. Hope this wasnt it. I would like to read more. Keep up the great work. Many rarely do.
Nick Kang
12:02 am | July 11, 2004
Yes, painted a very complex picture in my mind, one that stayed there throughout the story, so I wouldn't have to re-vision it. I have to do that with a lot of these stories nowadays, since most of the authors do such a bad job at describing the surroundings. Very cool, thanks for the read.

CoLd BlooDed
7:10 pm | July 10, 2004
I loved it. I could see it perfectly, like it was all happening before my eyes.

Great job, great, great job.
5:51 pm | July 10, 2004
Pretty interesting. Don't know if Brutes are actually that smart. Hmmm, Elites killing Brutes, I can see it.