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Comments for 'Savior of Halo: (part 1)'

1:05 am | June 13, 2004
Yeah, the spelling errors and the last part... I have to write these out on the FF submission form within around 30~40 minutes, and I found that I could never reach 750 words. The spelling errors: I'm normally a pretty damn good speller, but on words like "priviliege"... Without spellcheck it's a nightmare. I apologize for the inconvenience.
1:01 am | June 13, 2004
Thanks, all.
Nick Kang
12:12 pm | June 12, 2004
Indeed. I don't think I've ever read a story with those kind of...words...

CoLd BlooDed
12:56 am | June 12, 2004
I thought it was good, very good. Keep it up, Severian.
6:48 pm | June 11, 2004
Aside from the few spelling mistakes, and the attempt to make it 750 words, it is really good. Cortana has such fleeting and large thoughts, and you captured "her" character very well.