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Comments for 'The Dying Man's Story'

Elite ZOV
3:43 am | May 9, 2004
Hay, hella nice job! Like the discription. Besides, the guy is really honest with himself.

Keep on the good job!
6:18 pm | May 8, 2004
in the part that says their past lives, the only place where the past lives is in you mom.
11:54 am | May 7, 2004
Sorry, no sequel, just a single fic.
Nick Kang
11:18 am | May 7, 2004
Mmmmmm...rotting burgers. *mouth begins to water*

This story was pretty good. A bit confusing, yes, but I hope for a sequel soon. I also like the small hint of comedy mixed into such a serious story.

8:18 pm | May 6, 2004
Thanks, all, and yes it needs some formatting...
I LOATHE STAROFFICE 5.2. It chops up the paragraphs into unholy messes...
CoLd BlooDed
1:48 pm | May 6, 2004
Yeah, it could've used some work. But I really liked it.

Good job!
Snake Solid 117
4:44 pm | May 5, 2004
A little weird. Kinda cool though. Althogh it could have used some work it was still a pretty good story.