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Comments for 'Caesar-Speed (or, the traitorous Spartan)'

2:09 pm | May 11, 2004
Good idea,bad story. Try to take it a little further.good luck. Semper Fi!
CoLd BlooDed
12:50 am | May 7, 2004
8:18 pm | May 6, 2004
Hmm... Never asked what he uses as a name here. I saw it when he was writing it out though. Something about a downed pelican and all that.
CoLd BlooDed
1:53 pm | May 6, 2004
Who is your brother?
10:44 pm | May 5, 2004
Hey, I wrote this right after I wrote my first two, before I had a chance to read the comments. Sorry about not using the code, I use it to a little degree in my other story The Dying Man's story, and fully incorporate it in my upcoming one. And thanks for excluding me from the faceless horde of noobs, including my brother. HIS story uses too much coding.
The Silver Spartan
10:33 pm | May 5, 2004
I have one tip for you:


Now that I have got that out of my system,
Why do people have such a hard time using pseudocode??? All of these damn noobs! (Not you SeverianofUrth), you had at least a good story-line (although it was kind of short.) and used more than second grade writing skills.


The Silver Spartan
9:45 pm | May 5, 2004
Not Bad!
Not Bad at all!
Needs Some Improvements.