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Comments for 'Survival or Death: Episode I'

2:17 am | August 29, 2003
i agree with tango, it needs to be more descriptive. but it was ok. 8/10
1:37 am | August 22, 2003
The three marines decided to go to a pelican and fly back to the colony, Yachori. They flew into the planet's atmosphere and landed on a platform, only to see that all the inhabitants on it were killed. Luckily, they found a badly wounded marine that knew information on what happened. They got back to the Pelican, but not before covenant attacked them.

wow, that was like, what, the course of a week (pelican's aren't very powerful) and you used only a part of a paragraph?

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