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Comments for 'When Will It End?'

1:46 am | April 2, 2004
I'm finally writing the continuation of my old series!
2:29 am | April 1, 2004
Hey that was supposed to be F-l-u not F-;-u. Oh well.
2:26 am | April 1, 2004
It does have a nice voice, and it looks like you and everyone else already figured out that it is a little short.

The meter changes a lot (*I know, I know: shut up Flu*) but its nothing that couldn't be worked out.

I realize that these ideas probably just come to you out of nowhere, but the trick of a poet is to take that first inspiration and then drag the rest of the poem kicking and screaming out of that. Good luck.
1:17 pm | March 31, 2004
Yeah, you're right.
11:24 am | March 31, 2004
i liked it
im wonderin how itll end as well :D
8:33 am | March 31, 2004
Actually, they arn't that similar yours and mine. Same sort of question posed though. V nice.
10:06 pm | March 30, 2004
Nice, but I don't think that it took a lot of thought, i.e i've seen some of your other stuff and this isn't quite as special. Good, though.
10:03 pm | March 30, 2004
Thanks for your comments.
CoLd BlooDed
4:08 pm | March 30, 2004
Nice, I liked it.
12:43 pm | March 30, 2004
Good job, Sentinel, good job.