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Comments for 'The Story of Elite 117' |
saturn
5:14 pm | November 3, 2002
for all we know, that last post could be "linda" who "pretended" to be someone else.
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chickety china the chinese chicken
3:29 am | November 3, 2002
Kyle you nerd get a girlfriend ,Linda tha kicked ass
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saturn
4:00 am | November 1, 2002
oh wow. the HBO hospitality...
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Anonymous
3:29 pm | October 31, 2002
Disciple75... YOU SUCK!!!
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Anonymous
3:27 pm | October 31, 2002
You rule saturn!!!
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Disciple75
2:50 am | October 31, 2002
Hey Linda, very creative. I really like how you have expanded on the Elite and came up with the "litter" aspect. Very cool. I am going to find Neco's writing, that should be good as well! Keep up the writing!!!
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saturn
2:46 am | October 29, 2002
yea. maybe the new guy wants some sympathy from the HBO veterans so he pretends. this is awkward. besides girls always write angels and cookies and all sorts of puff along with their alias. linda is a woman's name, something u see at work, not a girl's.
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Kyle
8:21 pm | October 27, 2002
Well, why would a guy post as "Linda"?
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Knightmare(MM
6:09 am | October 27, 2002
Saturn, Whoretana loves you so stop talking behind her back. >\\
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Sarge
3:38 am | October 27, 2002
Sounds like soemthing from diablo.
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saturn
3:08 am | October 27, 2002
mr neco has every right to defend his heap and so far i dont think hes done anything offensive. Some of u folk may remember me back in the day when Earth People sucked and Saturians gutwrenched elites, but that was a long time ago. I understand cause after i started the revolutiionary Brethren of Saturn (because its non-earth), someone came out with a story about saturn's 14th moon, titan, that contradicted my story 3 days after.Ps: dont post full names. there are "stalkers", oooooo. ha. ok, besides wado, you're hitched with whoretana(haha, i forget, was that diablo's or wado's idea) so dont be straying off.
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Wado
8:49 pm | October 26, 2002
What's wrong with a girl posting? Besides Linda is the name of a Spartan from FoR.
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Anonymous
5:49 pm | October 26, 2002
Even worse, a girl who posts under her Full name!!!!!
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Kyle
4:24 pm | October 26, 2002
A GIRL????????
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Sarge
1:03 pm | October 26, 2002
El halo diablo thought it was funny.
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Sarge
1:01 pm | October 26, 2002
My ten page story and my five page chapter both got corrupted two or three days ago.
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Neco Divad
9:05 am | October 26, 2002
There is another? I thought I was the first in my field. Darn. I didn't mean anything by what I said. I just needed to make sure that this wsn't just some copy of mine. I spent close to 3 hours editing it after a stupid x-ray machine at an airport screwed it up. It went from a 2 page story to a 5 page jumble of letters. I'm sure you would feal the same if you did a ton of work and then another story pops up almost the same. I wrote about half the next chapter last night though. Only about half the voilance. Sorry for the long post.
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Knightmare(MM
2:11 am | October 26, 2002
Actually it was first. There wouldn't be any I if it was third. I said, I thought etc. (Examples of first person)
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Sarge
8:11 pm | October 25, 2002
Guess what Neco your story is a ripoff of someone elses. Theirs someone who already wrote one like yours. So... don't flame other ppl when you have done the same thing.
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IamSpartan
8:04 pm | October 25, 2002
It gets a bit confusing. You said you would write in first person to make it easier to understand, but most of it was written in third person. Other than that I thought it was rather interesting. The same general idea as Necko Divad (following an elite through Halo) but it takes a distinctly different path.
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Knightmare(MM
7:14 pm | October 25, 2002
I'm sure it's not a copy Neco. Give the author the benefit of the doubt, we're all friends, I hope. Contrary to what you comment on gruntkiller, I believe the begining was rather interesting. Goes from first person... To (Third person? I wonder if that's what happens...) But its first person... again.Only complaint I have with it... Some of those words could've been ordered with a bit more effectiveness. A relatively short piece yes, but it was simple enough that you could understand the point of the whole thing. Hope to see more.
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gruntkiller
6:16 pm | October 25, 2002
the begining sucked but after that it got better
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Neco Divad
5:47 pm | October 25, 2002
When did you start writing this. I just wrote something just like it. It's called "An Elites Legend". Before I flame you I want to know when you started, before or after you read mine? Did you read mine? No offence ment, I just want to make sure that this isn't a copy off of mine. I'm sure you would feal the same way.
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